박희원 Melissa 美丽莎
let's speak together hi i'm lily, i want to learn chinese so i'll post sentences if someone could help and correct me it would be great! you can also post a message in english i'll correct you! 
let's start with:
你好我叫美丽莎。我是法国人你呢。我住在perpignan。我是学生和我一十八岁。
13 мар. 2009 г., 21:12
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okay thanks!! it's great that you helped me!!
14 марта 2009 г.
hi ,lily,my name is Laura.first i want be your friend ,and teach you chinese. Then about you sentences :
你好我叫美丽莎。this one is OK!
我是法国人你呢。if you use a comma between 人and你 it will be better.
我住在perpignan。this one no problem
我是学生和我一十八岁。please change it to two sentences as:我是学生。我十八岁。as i'm a student and i'm eighteen we don't always say together use 和 to put them together. another point for you, we nerver say 一十八岁,we only say 十instead of 一十for oral chinese.but we will say 二十,三十and so on.
在普通话里我们通常只用“我”表示自己,but we have a lot of way say “我”in our dialect . if you don't want see so many "我”in you sentences just leave same of  them out. so your sentences can be say like :你好,我叫美丽莎,是个法国人,你呢?我住在perpignan,是个学生,今年十八岁。
if your want to learn more please contact me. send e-mail to me([email protected])
14 марта 2009 г.
hi 
i'm kungko from China
i live in hangzhou, it's one of the most beautiful city in China
maybe i can offer some help in your Chinese learning 
and also i want to know more about France (it's really a charming country)
by the way, l love the movie "Amelie" so much
 
14 марта 2009 г.
sorry i keep saying "我" but i don't know if i could say it in an other way (like in japanese)
13 марта 2009 г.
박희원 Melissa 美丽莎
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), английский, французский, корейский, монгольский
Изучаемый язык
китайский (путунхуа), корейский, монгольский