shey
Does it make sense?

Don't let your temper on a nonsense thing, you would end up hurting not only yourself but others.

P.S

Comments and correction  please ☺️

31 янв. 2016 г., 15:20
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Don't get angry about / Don't lose your temper over

something silly or small.  You might end up hurting yourself and also others.


"Not only.... but also..." is a good construction, especially for formal writing.

31 января 2016 г.
shey
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), английский, филиппинский (тагалогский), японский, корейский
Изучаемый язык
китайский (путунхуа), английский, японский, корейский