Ali
my mistakes?!

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your goals 

You must start your goals immediately, put it down in your note for remember yourself everyday, make a deadline for every goal, and don't be depressed from the people that impact on your objectives, be a responsible, punctual, adaptable. When you finished your goals you will be jubilant ,then you will ravenous for other coals.<o:p></o:p>

Put your life in the straight way and never get out , learn everything you will see, and never stop . take the action from this moment and never ever procrastinating. Superb people how make their goals for long-term ,they never boring or stop , be like these people and you will see the change.     <o:p></o:p>

24 мая 2018 г., 8:38
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When you want to learn new vocabulary, look for it in texts, in audios or on videos.  Then you will begin to learn the natural verb/noun collocations used with your new words.

A collocation is a pair of words often used together.

For example, we often:

set (v), work towards (v), achieve (v) our goals (n)

We do not usually start (v) or impact (v) our goals (n)

24 мая 2018 г.
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Alright, Try not to use the comma more then twice. Like that you wouldn't add a comma, everytime you want to state something else, you would add a period. :))
24 мая 2018 г.