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Today is 16 of November. My nda result was expected to announced on 11th November but it is not out yet. I have been pretty sure about the selection in written so i started preparing for ssb just after few days of Written. My preparations of ssb are not up to the mark so i need to do something about it. I can't afford failure this time. I have to work hard to get the things done. This time no excuse will work out. I will give my phone to my brother so that i can focus on studies because I think phone is a great reason for my failure. I couldn't complete two targets. Now the new target will start from 17 of November. It means from tomorrow. This time i will focus to do all the work done and also put extra efforts so that i can complete the previous targets also. I need to jot down all the god and bad things that i do daily. Then after reading that paper. I will be able to solve the matter and it will also help to improve myself. I am good today. I have recovered from the pain which was given to me. During this phase i am facing many ups and downs. I think all these ups and downs are good for everyone because they makes us strong. They tell us what is reality of life. I would like to tell you one thing that. Life is not about success and failure but life is about being happy. See if you have a dream it is obvious that you will work for it and eventually you will get it. Some will get it in starting and some will get it after few unsuccessful attempts. So i have to be happy in my life. A couple of days ago i posted my problem on this app and a bunch of people came ahead to help me i felt extremely happy after their this kind of gesture. I hope you will rate my discussion honestly.
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