Taku Kobayashi
【TOPIC】 Today,many people enjoy jogging before or after work. Do you think the number of such joggers will increase in the future? 【My Opinion】 Yes, I agree with the statement that many people enjoy jogging before or work will increase in the future. I have two reasons. First of all, many people are interested in their health these days. Jogging would be helpful for their health in the future. In addition, jogging can help relieve stress. Secondly, jogging is also useful social interaction. It would be a good opportunity to meet new friends. For the reasons that I mentioned many people would be interested in jogging in the future.
14 янв. 2024 г., 11:01
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【TOPIC】 Today,many people enjoy jogging before or after work. Do you think the number of such joggers will increase in the future? 【My Opinion】 Yes, I agree with the statement that the number of people who enjoy jogging before or work will increase in the future. I have two reasons. First of all, many people are interested in their health these days. Jogging would be helpful for their health in the future. In addition, jogging can help relieve stress. Secondly, jogging is also useful for social interaction. It is a good opportunity to meet new friends. For the reasons that I mentioned, I believe that many people will be interested in (taking up) jogging in the future.
Well done. You set out your ideas logically. This is really a plan for a longer essay.
14 января 2024 г.
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