Исправления · 4
- I am able to understand most of your points. This is a good, early effort.
- I believe the program you called "Legend of Silk-road" is known to the English-speaking as the "Belt and Road" initiative.
- I believe "Economy" is a better term than "Finances" for what you describe in your second point.
There are lots of errors! I'm sure that you will improve as time goes on. Here's a list of the most important corrections needed:
• Proofread your work. Proper nouns should always begin with a capital letter.
• We often put the verb before the noun when asking a question: Why are leaves green? Why is the sky blue?
• "in recent years...."
• In this case you would use people, not peoples, and you should treat it as plural (people are, not people is).
• China is full of . . . (China is a singular noun.)
• I think all of these are reasons . . .
The good news is that I understood everything except "many steps of Chinese." If you can get your point across, that's something to be quite proud of!
Вы хотите продвигаться быстрее?
Присоединяйтесь к этому обучающему сообществу и попробуйте выполнить бесплатные упражнения!
Не упустите возможность выучить язык, не выходя из дома. Ознакомьтесь с подборкой опытных преподавателей и запишитесь на свой первый урок прямо сейчас!
Начните учиться сегодня
