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My Madonna
There was a famous japanese person whose name was 'Seityou Matumoto'. When he was alive, he stated that:
"(double quotations are used for when someone said something) MyMadonna must be following these conditions:
Firstly,the relationship with the woman must be platonic. It is inconceivable if she is lustful, she must strictly to be pure and having virginity and be a virgin.
Next, the relation must have unrequited love from both sides. When mutual love exists, the image which is raised even to the sacred region is boiled instantly, and it turns into a familiar actual unrelated relationship.
The unattainable object is a thought that doesn't suit at all in this world. This distance is the factor which creates a painful yearning. The Madonna must be a peerless beauty. Since she is called the madonna at all, it is the generalized ideal image that there must be no room where one's personality can enter. It is useless to talk about the woman who is good of disposition although not beautiful. "
I agree with his opinion 100% .
That was a very interesting Notebook entry :) I hope my corrections are of some help. Your English is fantastic!
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