today today, i finished my homework--a business contract,i have to make it in two copies,one is in chinese,the other is translated into english.i spent a week to prepare and write it.at the moment of

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today today, i finished my homework--a business contract,i have to make it in two copies,one is in chinese,the other is translated into english.i spent a week to prepare and write it.at the moment of completing it ,i was laughing like a crazy.however, there are still other homeworks for me.well,i shuold study hard.

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Here is a llitle bit of language I'd like to suggest :

I was laughing like a crazy >>> like crazy or like a crazy person

homeworks >>> homework is uncountable noun and is always singular, so no 's'. You can use 'homework assignments' instead.

so good luck with your assignments and don't forget to take some break!

Cheers

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