Silent Love

"I'm sorry that I've never ever even attempted to hold your hand like many other young couples on the street."

"I'm also sorry that I scarcely keep staring stared at your lovely face lovely, eye-to-eye."

"But, you know what sweetheart?
We've always been walking along the same path of life.
We've always kept our eyes on the same spot as now.
We've always shared happiness as we are listening an to adorable music now.
You know how much, how badly I love you, don't you?"

P.S.
I spend spent nearly two years patrolling along the platform at my workplace, a subway station.
I'm also faced with many couples at the platform who passionately express their love for each other.
So that's why this elderly couple was so impressive for to me.

Keep up the good work!

Silent Love

"I'm sorry that I've never ever attempted to hold your hand like many other young couples on the street."

"I'm also sorry that I scarce keep staring at your lovely face lovely, eye-to-eye."

"But, you know what sweetheart?
We've always been walking along the same path of life.
We've always kept our eyes on the same spot as now.
We've always shared happiness as we are listening an adorable music now.
You know how much, how badly I love you. Don't you?"

P.S)
I spent (you fixed this already) nearly two years patrolling along the platform at my workplace, a subway station.
I'm also faced with many couples at the platform who passionately express their love each other.
So that's why this elderly couple was so impressive to for me.

Only a few little things. This is beautiful!