The Psychological Problems of University Students
In recent years, more and more students have psychological problems like suicidal tendencies, homosexual, stealing, spirits dropping and so on. They were some new phenomenon merely a couple of years ago, but now they have surrounded our life. The trend, featured by spirits dropping in particular has inevitably threaten our students life.
They are two factors responsible for those phenomenon. In the first place, we are live in a pot with high pressure. Proper pressure can motivate us doing better, otherwise, doing worse. Moreover, many students don’t have a clear goal, so they are easy swim with the steam. Even feel confused and don’t know how to do.
From the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that it’s important to us that keep a happy mind. It’s possible that in the future, the tendencies will decrease.
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The Psychological Problems of University Students
In recent years, more and more students have psychological problems like suicidal tendencies, homosexuality, stealing, spirits dropping depression and so on. They These were some new phenomenon phenomena merely a couple of years ago, but now they have surrounded our life engulfed us. The This trend, featured by spirits dropping depression in particular, has inevitably threatened our students' life lives.
They There are two factors responsible for those phenomenon these phenomena. In the first place, we are live in a pot with high pressure cooker. Proper pressure can motivate us doing to do better, otherwise, doing we do worse. Moreover, many students don’t have a clear goal, so they are easy swim with the steam it is easy for them to go with the flow of whatever is happening around them. Even They feel confused and don’t know how what to do.
From the this analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that it’s important to for us that to keep a happy mind. It’s possible that in the future, the these tendencies will decrease.
Hi! Well done. There were some places where I suggested a different or additional words. Those are highlighted in green.
Also, I just want to note that "to go with the flow" is a very common saying for us.
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@dan I have been realised my thought was wrong.
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Yeh...how could homosexuality be on a par with suicidal tendencies and stealing? If you've grown up in a small city then fair enough but you'll find that actually in most countries now (generally speaking) homosexuality is not seen as a positive or negative thing, just another way of being. Don't let your teachers brainwash you.
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Is homosexuality considered a psychological disorder?
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@Swechi it's true in my country.
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