Wo de hao pengyou Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. Ta jiao Lena. Ta shi ba sui. Ta you yi ge meimei. Ta mama shi daifu. Ta baba zuo yinhang gongzuo. Ta jia ren dou zhu Moseke.Ta cong Meiguo

Войти

Зарегистрироваться

Liza

Wo de hao pengyou Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. Ta jiao Lena. Ta shi ba sui. Ta you yi ge meimei. Ta mama shi daifu. Ta baba zuo yinhang gongzuo. Ta jia ren dou zhu Moseke.Ta cong Meiguo lai zher xuexi. Lena xihuan tiaowu. Ta gen ta meimei chang chang bangzhu ta mama zuo fan, ye bangzhu zhengli ta woshi. Lena mei tian qi dian qi chuang. Qi chuang yihou, ta chi fan he kan xinwen. Ta mama kan dianshi de shihou, ta baba zhen zai ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua. Ta xia wu yi dian shang ke, wu dian xia ke. Xia ke yihou ta gei wo da dianhua. Wanshang women yiqi qu dianyingyuan.

20 нояб. 2012 г., 15:01

Исправления · 7

Wo de hao pengyou

Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. Ta jiao Lena. Ta shi ba sui. Ta you yi ge meimei. Ta mama shi daifu. Ta baba zuo zai yinhang gongzuo. Ta jia ren dou zhu zai Mosike.Ta cong Meiguo lai zher xuexi.
Lena xihuan tiaowu. Ta gen ta meimei chang chang bangzhu ta mama zuo fan, ye bangzhu zhengli ta Who? Her mother or just herself? If it's just herself. Write 'ta ziji de' woshi. Another issues is maybe you have to swap the two words I've just underlined.
Lena mei tian qi dian qi chuang. Qi chuang yihou, ta chi fan he In Chinese 'he' is not like 'and' in English, which should not contact two verbs and should only be used to contact nones etc. kan xinwen. Ta mama kan dianshi de shihou, ta baba zhen zai may change to 'shichang' or 'jiuhui' ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua.
Ta xia wu yi dian shang ke, wu dian xia ke. Xia ke yihou ta jiuhui gei wo da dianhua. Wanshang women yiqi qu dianyingyuan.

20 ноября 2012 г.

"ta baba zhen zai ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua. "should change into "ta baba zheng zai gei ta pengyou da dianhua." Other sentences are good O(∩_∩)O~

20 ноября 2012 г.

hi liza，Please focus me , thanks

20 ноября 2012 г.

Wo de hao pengyou

Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. Ta jiao Lena. Ta shi ba sui. Ta you yi ge meimei. Ta mama shi daifu. Ta baba zuo yinhang gongzuo. Ta jia ren dou zhu Moseke (Mosike).Ta cong Meiguo lai zher xuexi.
Lena xihuan tiaowu. Ta gen ta meimei chang chang bangzhu ta mama zuo fan, ye bangzhu ta zhengli woshi.
Lena mei tian qi dian qi chuang. Qi chuang yihou, ta chi fan (zaocan-breakfast) he kan xinwen. Ta mama kan dianshi de shihou, ta baba zhen (zheng) zai ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua.
Ta xia wu yi dian shang ke, wu dian xia ke. Xia ke yihou ta gei wo da le dianhua. Wanshang women yiqi qu le dianyingyuan.

20 ноября 2012 г.

Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. 我现在想介绍我的好朋友 ---> 我想介绍我的好朋友 Ta jiao Lena. 他叫Lena ---> good Ta shi ba sui. 他是八岁 ---> 他的年龄是八岁 Ta you yi ge meimei. 他有一个妹妹 ----> good Ta mama shi daifu. 他妈妈是大夫 ----> good Ta baba zuo yinhang gongzuo. 他爸爸做银行工作 ----> 他爸爸在银行工作 Ta jia ren dou zhu Moseke. 他家人都住莫斯科 ----> 他全家都住在莫斯科 Ta cong Meiguo lai zher xuexi. 他从没过来这儿学习 ----> good Lena xihuan tiaowu. Lena 习惯跳舞 ----> good Ta gen ta meimei chang chang bangzhu ta mama zuo fan, ye bangzhu zhengli ta woshi. 他跟他妹妹常常帮助他妈妈做饭， *** ----> ？？？ Lena mei tian qi dian qi chuang. Qi chuang yihou, ta chi fan he kan xinwen. Lena 每天七点起床，起床后，他吃饭和看新闻 ----> good Ta mama kan dianshi de shihou, ta baba zhen zai ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua. 他妈妈看电视的时候，他爸爸正在他给他朋友打电话。 ----> 他妈妈吃饭的时候，他爸爸在打电话 Ta xia wu yi dian shang ke, wu dian xia ke. 他下午一点上课，五点下课 ----> good Xia ke yihou ta gei wo da dianhua. 下课以后他给我打电话 Wanshang women yiqi qu dianyingyuan. 晚上我们一起去电影院 ----> 晚上我们一起看电影

20 ноября 2012 г.

Подробнее

Вы хотите продвигаться быстрее?

Присоединяйтесь к этому обучающему сообществу и попробуйте выполнить бесплатные упражнения!