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Why can't I do that? I couldn't send any messages tonight. Was it my fault? I am very very tired.I go to bed. Good night.((+_+))
6 февр. 2013 г., 15:02
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Why can't I do that?

I couldn't send any messages tonight.
Was it my fault?
I am very very tired. I'm going to bed.
Good night.((+_+))

 

You wrote this very well!

6 февраля 2013 г.

Why can't I do that?

I couldn't send any messages tonight.
Was it my fault?
I am very very tired.I go to bed.
Good night.((+_+))

 

Some thoughts if you do not mind.

You can also say:

(adding a comma with a time frame. With the comma they become conjoined thoughts)


I will go to bed, good night

I will go to bed, in a hour

I will go to bed, soon

I will go to bed, now

I will go to bed, when I am tired

I will go to bed immediately

 

4 августа 2015 г.
Hello, apart from Anna's correction below, you may want to add a comma in between "very very" too. :) "I am very very tired." --> "I am very, very tired." You can also add a comma in between repeated words like "...really, really...". Hope this helps.
23 января 2019 г.
what 's wrong with it ,I'm new to this website .hope you will help me thanks.
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