Tourists from China ignore Big Ben. 忽略大本钟 互译2
译自 Knuo的译文 http://www.italki.com/entry/321946
Now, many department stores of London, like Selfridges, employ several dozens of staff who can speak Chinese. Qiangenling, working in the sales department, finds that Chinese customers do not like pushy sales, and it is very important to hand accustom with your two hands. Surprisingly, a casino, in Western district of London, has a whole floor for Chinese clients. All of the staffs here can speak mandarin, and the casino decorates in a Chinese way. There is no sign that Chinese people would stop chasing luxuries. "We always shock by the clients’ wedding spends. Most of them spend nearly 100,000 pounds , but there are a certain amount of people spend more than 250,000 pounds. It is common to hire an Aston Martin, but in one wedding, only for the arrival, the client hired 10 Rolls Royce." Chinese weddings, in an English style. It is far away from the Chairman Mao's frugal life style.
Chinese tourists who visited France are 5 times more than Chinese tourists in Britain. If it attracts more Chinese tourists, the UK could generates more job opportunities. Some experts say that the small number of tourists due to the issues of visa. A visa allows free traveling in all of the European countries except the UK, which needs a separate one. The forms for an England visa including many pages, and it must be written in English. Some applicants must provide their bank statements several months in advance, and only 12 cities in China can apply this visa. “I only find a negative feedback that Chinese tourists coming here and applying a visa is such a humiliation.” said a staff of a luxury district. “It sounds like a nightmare, and it shocks me when I find there are still some people who can get here.” The UK Border Agency insists that they do not cut the road for Chinese tourists, and they are trying to simplify the process. At the same time, Hackney , which lies in the east of London, becomes a tourist sight. An automobile worker confused that, “They take a tourist bus to come here, and leave after a few moments. “ said a confused automobile worker. Shoreditch art scene and Dalston's nightclubs could not attract them, their attention focus on the discount outlets of Burberry, which is opposite the Hackney fried chicken shop.
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[Here are the main things you should work on.
1) Conditional tense: two joined conditional clauses always have to match. So, for example, I could say "If I were taller, then I could be a basketball player". There are past, present and future tenses, but there are also conditional versions of these. In your case, you have something like "If the UK could attract more visitors, then it could create more jobs". Always remember that when you have two clauses, there must be a conditional-type word in each one.
2) Parts of speech: in English, it is stricter on whether a word is a verb, adjective, noun, adverb, etc. You need to be careful in choosing the one that fits. In your text, you wrote "The forms including many pages", but "including" is a preposition and you need a verb, such as "include" or "are made up of". And, "we always shock", but "shock" is a noun; instead you should say "we are always shocked", where "are" is a verb and "shocked" is an adjective. Remember that EVERY CLAUSE NEEDS A VERB, with no exceptions, so think about which word is your verb.
3) Set phrases: with any language, it is phrases that we speak and not words. With the internet as it is now, nearly everything has been written before, so you do not need to make up a new phrase. Before you write something, you can just use Google to see if that phrase has been written before, and if has few exact matches returned, then think about changing it a little bit until you get a big set of matches, and then make sure you learn that phrase for the future. For example, I tried "automobile worker" and got almost nothing, but if I try "mechanic" I get much much more. I think this last category is the most important, and if you use that going forward then your English writing will improve dramatically. ]
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Now, many department stores of London, like Selfridges, employ several dozens of staff who can speak Chinese. Qiangenling, working in the sales department, finds that Chinese customers do not like sales staff to be pushy sales, and it is very important to hand accustom things to customers with your two both hands. Surprisingly, a casino, in a Wwestern district of London, has dedicated a whole floor for to Chinese clients. All of the staffs here can speak mandarin, and the casino decorates in a Chinese way is set out according to Chinese preferences. There is no sign that Chinese people will would stop chasing satisfy their passion for luxuryies items any time soon. "We are always shocked by the clients’ wedding spends expenditures. Most of them spend nearly 100,000 pounds , but there are a certain amount of people spend more than 250,000 pounds. It is common to hire an Aston Martin, but in one wedding, only just for the arrival, the client hired 10 Rolls Royces." Chinese weddings, in an English style. It is far away from the Chairman Mao's frugal life style.
There are fives times as many Chinese tourists who visited France are 5 times more than Chinese tourists in last year than those who visited Britain. If it could attracts more Chinese tourists, then the UK could generates more job opportunities. Some experts say that the small number of tourists due to the issues of visas. A European visa allows free traveling in all of the European countries except the UK, which needs a separate one. The forms for an England a UK visa including is made up of many pages, and it must be written completed in English. Some applicants must provide their bank statements covering several months in advance, and at only 12 cities in China can one apply for this visa. “I only find a that the only negative feedback that received from Chinese tourists coming here and is that applying for a visa is such a humiliation.” said a one member of staff of representing a luxury district. “It sounds like a nightmare, and it shocks me when I find there are still some people who can get here.” The UK Border Agency insists that they do not cut the road for welcome Chinese tourists, and that they are trying to simplify the visa application process. At the same time, Hackney , which lies in the east of London, becomes has become a tourist sight site. An A local automobile worker car mechanic, slightly confused, said that, “They take a tourist bus to come here, and then leave after a few moments. “ said a confused automobile worker. The Shoreditch art scene and Dalston's nightclubs could not attract them, instead their attention is focused on the discount outlets of Burberry, which is have just opened opposite the a Hackney fried chicken shop takeaway.
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