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REAL by Takehiko Inoue I read a manga (Japanese comic), titled REAL by Takehiko Inoue. The story is about three teenagers (all boys). They are basketball players and love basketball very much. The first boy named Tomomi Nomiya, a drop-out who was a basketball player in senior high school. He seems doesn't care about anything else beside basketball. After he drop out, decided to continue playing basketball by joining a team named TOKYO LIGHTNING. Nomiya accidentaly met Kiyoharu Togawa, the second boy. Kiyoharu's leg was amputated when he was in junior high school due to sickness. (I forgot the name hehe). But it was something about his bone, so the doctor decided to amputated his leg. Kiyoharu plays a wheel-chair basketball with his team, named TIGER and he is chooses to becaome a national wheel-chair player in japan. The third boy name is Takahashi Hisanobu. He was at the same school with Nomiya. A 'high-level-high-schooler', an 'A rank' person, 'the best of all his friend', that's all what Takakashi thinking about. He's a basketball player too along with Nomiya, altough their relationship wasn't that good. takahashi got hit by truck when he tried to run away from a man whose his bicycle stolen by Takahashi and his friend, Fumika. Now, Takahashi stayed in hospital. He was very shock after hearing the doctor said that it was imposible for him to walk again after this accident. But, he didn't give up, he tries rehabilitation at the hospital to br able to play basketball again someday. This three boys is related in an unique way, i think. They love basketball very much and they're trying to pass the obstacles they're facing. I love this manga very much. I am waiting the 11nd volume to be released in Indonesia. The 12nd volume of this manga was released in Japan recently. So maybe i must wait for months or year for this manga to be released. :( If you are interested in sport and psychological story, you must read this manga! :D I've collected Tekehiko Inoue's manga like Slam Dunk, Vagabond and this one, REAL. I hope Indonesian publisher will release other good mangas. :)
28 мар. 2013 г., 12:25
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REAL by Takehiko Inoue

I read a manga (Japanese comic), titled REAL by Takehiko Inoue. The story is about three teenage boys. They are basketball players and love basketball very much.

The first boy, named Tomomi Nomiya, is a drop-out who was a basketball player in senior high school. He doesn't seem to care about anything else besides basketball. After he dropped out, he decided to continue playing basketball by joining a team called TOKYO LIGHTNING.

Nomiya accidentaly met Kiyoharu Togawa, the second boy. Kiyoharu's leg was amputated when he was in junior high school due to a sickness. (I forgot the name hehe). But it was something about his bone, so the doctor decided to amputate his leg. Kiyoharu plays a wheel-chair basketball with his team called TIGER and he chose to become a national wheel-chair player in japan.

The third boy is Takahashi Hisanobu. He went to the same school as Nomiya. A 'high-level-high-schooler', an 'A rank' person, 'the best out of all his friends', that's all Takakashi thought about. He's a basketball player too along with Nomiya, although their relationship wasn't that good. Takahashi got hit by truck when he tried to run away from a man whose bicycle was stolen by Takahashi and his friend, Fumika. Now Takahashi stayed in hospital. He was very shocked after hearing the doctor say that it was imposible for him to walk again after this accident. But he didn't give up, he is undergoing rehabilitation at the hospital to be able to play basketball again someday.

These three boys are related in an unique way, I think. They love basketball very much and they're trying to pass the obstacles they're facing.
I love this manga very much. I am waiting the 11th (you only used nd with 2 as a unit ie 2nd 22nd 52nd etc) volume to be released in Indonesia. The 12th (except this one :D) volume of this manga was released in Japan recently; so I must wait for months or a year for this manga to be released. :(
If you are interested in a story about sport mixed with psychology, you must read this manga! :D

I've collected Tekehiko Inoue's manga like Slam Dunk, Vagabond and this one, REAL. I hope an Indonesian publisher will release other good mangas. :)

 

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28 марта 2013 г.
thank you for your coment! I think your English is good :D
29 марта 2013 г.
It's very easy to understand this notebook. この ノートは とても わかりやすい です。(kono notebook wa totemo wakari yasui desu) I think that your edit is very good. 編集(へんしゅう)が とても 良い と 思います。(hensyuu ga totemo yoi to omoimasu) I'll try to read that. わたしも 読んで みます。(watashi mo yonde mimasu) Manga is Japanese treasure. マンガは にほんの たからもの ですね。(manga wa nihon no takaramono desune) By the way, am I writing a lots of wrong English here? ところで、 わたしは ここに 間違えた 英語を 書いて いませんか? (tokorode watashi wa kokoni machigaeta eigo wo kaite imasenka?) I'm sorry. ごめんねーーm(_ _)m   (gomenne)
28 марта 2013 г.
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