Write a letter applying for a job
Write a letter applying for a job. You describe your qualities as a person and
explain why you think you are the perfect candidate for the post. Write your letter.
To Dear Digital Controller Company,
My name's I am Toni, I'm 27 and I'm from Spain. I have an electronic engineering degree.I am very interested in your job advertisement job. I like electronic and program field (?) and I'd like contribute in to your company for and give it you the best that I know how to do.I'm an apassionate of the passionate about electronics and robotics engineering. I have knowledge am skilled in programmer and design circuits, so I have so much a lot of experience in this field.I've worked in other sites like analogger and faconell companies, so I got skills am also skilled in this field.
I considerate myself an organised and efficient person and I enjoy working as part of a team and I am good at working on my own.I believe I am hardworking and I am used to working under pressure. I have a driving license and I'm available to travel anywhere.
Best regards.,
To Human Resources Department.
Hi Toni. This is a really good letter. I wish I could write this well in Spanish! The main problem is that it is too informal. Contractions (I'm, I've, my name's) are informal, and should be avoided in formal writing. I recommend reading some examples of formal English writing (job application letters, reports) to help you improve.
Shaun.
Write a letter applying for a job
Write a letter applying for a job. You describe your qualities as a person and
explain why you think you are the perfect candidate for the post. Write your letter.
To Digital Controller Company:
My name's Toni, I'm 27 and I'm from Spain. Let me introduce my self, I am Toni from Valencia, Spain and I am 27 years old. I have an a degree in Electronic Engineering degree.I am very interested in you advertisement job. your job advertisement. I like have a passion for electronics and programming field as wells as robotic engineering. If given a chance, I'd like to contribute to the success of your company and I promise to give my best in everything I do. for give it the the best that I know to do I'm an apassionate of the electronic and robotics engineering.I have knowledge in programmer programming and design circuits so because I have so much experience in this field. I've worked in other sites like Analogger and Faconell companies, so I assure you that I got have skills in this field.
I considerate consider myself a as a well -organise and efficient person, I also enjoy working as part of a team and I am but I can also perform good at working on my own. I believe that I am hardworking and I am used to can work even under pressure. I have a driving license and I'm capable available to travel anywhere.
Best regards.
To Human Resources Department.
Note: hello toni, you have to be concious of your grammar specially on subject-verb agreement and your letter should look like this:
Date: May 10, 2013
To Digital Controller Company
Human Resources Department
Dear Sir/Madam,
Let me introduce my self, I am Toni from Valencia, Spain and I am 27 years old. I have a degree in Electronic Engineering. I am very interested in your job advertisement. I have a passion for electronics and programming as wells as robotic engineering. If given a chance, I'd like to
contribute to the success of your company and I promise to give my best in everything I do. I have knowledge in programming and design circuits because I have so much experience in this field. I've worked in other sites like Analogger and Faconell companies, so I assure you that I have skills in this field.
I consider myself as a well -organize and efficient person, I also enjoy working as part of a team but I can also perform on my own. I believe that I am hardworking and can work even under pressure. I have a driving license and capable of travelling anywhere.
Best regards. Thank you very much.
Sincerely yours,
Toni


