Paris

I've been in Paris for two days in this month with my school trip. I think I'm in love with this town. The Seine and the Eiffel tower at night are two of the most beautifull things I've ever seen. Lights, pink sky, music... I really felt that I'm alive. I think I'm jealous - I envy everybody who lives in this town, and who has that view for all the time. It's not fair. However, I need to improve my language command, really. I was feeling like a mime artist when I tried to talk with sb, you know, 3 words, 10 moves of body, but I'm quite proud of myself, because all in all I was able to communicate when it was necessary.

[Good job.  Paris is one of my favorites, too.  It's beautiful at night.  Work on shortening your sentences and not put so many phrases together with commas.]