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hisa.yuuki
all right!! I'll try to write a few text here in english. and, i don't care my english whether right or wrong. so, please tell me where is wrong! due to bring english skills up, i try to write short message here as possible. thanks~! if anyone can talk with me in english, please send to me a message,ok? i can use english, japanese and chinese
18 мая 2013 г., 17:34
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All Right!!

 

I'll try to write a few sentences here in English, and I don't care whether my English is right or wrong.

So, please tell me where it is wrong!

To bring my English skills up, I'll try to write short messages here when/whenever as possible.

Thanks~!

If anyone can talk with me in English, please send to me a message, ok?

I can use English, Japanese and Chinese.

 

This entire thing is a text. You could say "I'll try to write a text, in English"

The first letter of sentences and proper nouns are capitals.

You're not meant to start a sentence with 'and', since it connects different parts of the same sentence. Technically, you're also not meant to write 'and' after a comma as well, but no one really cares about that (except English teachers).

"...please send me a message" could also be "please send a message to me".


Hope that helped.

18 мая 2013 г.

all right!!

I'll try to write a few text here in english.

and, i don't care my english whether right or wrong.

so, please tell me where is wrong!

due to bring english skills up, i try to write short message here as possible everyday.

thanks~!

if anyone can talk with me in english, please send to me a message,ok?

i can use english, japanese and chinese

18 мая 2013 г.
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hisa.yuuki
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китайский (путунхуа), китайский (тайваньский), английский, японский
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