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Michelle
Everyday is rainy day There are almost rain everyday,i don't like raining day,especially heavy storm.Although it is wonderful and fresh after downpower,but,i'v hated it come everyday.No mood,no happy,feel sad and dysphoric.i think rainning day is good for sleep not work,because i always feel tried.The heavy rain compelled us to stay indoors,the river was in flood after the heavy rain,a torrent of rain came down and damaged the crops.we can see the news report it everyday. Why the weathe like this in this season???It is not looks like summer will come……
21 мая 2013 г., 2:00
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Every day <em>(it is 'every day', because 'everyday' is an adjective - 比如说 'everyday occurrence') </em>has been a rainy day

There are has been almost rain almost every day, and i don't like rainying days, especially when there are heavy storms too. Although it is wonderful and fresh after a downpouwer <em>(pour, not power)</em> , but <em>(not but with although)</em>, still i've hated it coming every day. No good mood, no happyiness, feel sad and restless dysphoric <em>(sounds like a translator option!)</em>. i think rainyning days are is good for sleeping, not working, because i always feel tiried.

<em>(new paragraph I think because there is a slightly changed topic, talking about effects, different tense too)</em>

The heavy rain compelled us to stay indoors, the river was in flood after the heavy rain, and a torrential of rain came down and <em>(unnecessary)</em> damaged the crops. We can see the news reports about it every day.
Why is the weather always like this in this season??? It is not looks like summer will never come……

22 мая 2013 г.

Everyday is a rainy day

It rains almost everyday. There are almost rain everyday.  I don't like rainy raining days, especially a heavy storm. Although it is wonderful and fresh after a downpower, but, I hate it coming everyday. I have a bad No mood, I'm not happy, I feel sad and dysphoric. I think a rainy rainning day is good for sleep, not work, because I always feel tired. (1) The heavy rain compelled us to stay indoors, the river was in flood flooded after the heavy rain, a torrent of rain came down and damaged the crops. We can see the news report it everyday. 

Why is the weather like this in this season??? It is not looking looks like summer will come...

(or It looks like summer will never come)

 

Good, I understand everything you write! I am just correcting grammar.

You can say "there is rain" but rain is also a verb, so "it is raining" has more action!

Also an an adjective: rainy

We always put a space after periods:  ...the end. Next ...  Not: ...the end.Next ...

We capitalize the first letter in every sentence, also I.

'hated' is past tense, so I made it present tense like the other verbs

dysphoric?!  new word to me!

(1) This next sentence is all in past tense. That is ok, but you might say "Yesterday, the rain..." or "In the past, the rain..." so that the reader sees that now you are talking about another day!


 

22 мая 2013 г.

Over here , we have a period of rainy days before really coming to summer weather . We designate it as seasonal rain (梅雨 plum rains , formal name) . It usually cause your clothing and furniture damp to have mold . I consider it is not healthful for most people . Actually , I hate humid weather .

21 мая 2013 г.
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Michelle
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китайский (путунхуа), китайский (кантонский), китайский (другой), английский, корейский
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английский, корейский