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Be Careful Not To Get A Cold Before we headed to each other's home, she said to me as a parting wish, "Be careful not to get a cold." That sounded kinda ridiculous because she was sick for three days. So I responded to her, snorting, "Are you telling me not to get a cold? It's you who should be careful with whatever." And it's strange that now I feel like I'm getting a cold. I wouldn't be so happy to get mocked by her tomorrow. I'll sleep with a towel around my neck and see what happens.
21 окт. 2010 г., 15:33
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Be Careful Not To Get A Cold

Before we headed home, she said to me as a parting wish, "Be careful not to catch a cold." That sounded kind of ridiculous because she was sick for the past three days. So I <strike>told to </strike>her, snorting, "Are you telling me not to catch a cold? It's you who should be careful with that."

And it's strange that now I feel like I'm catching a cold. I won't be very happy when I get mocked by her tomorrow. I'll sleep with a towel around my neck and see what happens.

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22 октября 2010 г.

Be Careful Not To Get A Cold

Before we each headed <strike>to each other's</strike> home, she said to me as a parting wish, "Be careful not to get a cold." That sounded kinda ridiculous because she had been sick for three days. So I responded to her, snorting, "Are you telling me not to get a cold? It's you who should be careful with whatever."

And it's strange that now I feel like I'm getting a cold. I wouldn't be so happy to get mocked by her tomorrow. I'll sleep with a towel around my neck and see what happens.


21 октября 2010 г.
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