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here's how I translated it. You seemed to have the major idea, but the translation to English was a little wrong. 여러분 is used is this passage to address a crowd. She's not saying 어려분 to say 'we' she's saying 'you' as the plural form. I think this confused you; the passage is a person explaining the shop. She's not part of the shop.
Do you like chocolate? I would like to intoduce 'Coffee and Chocolate' to you. It's a coffee shop located in front of the school's entrance. They sell coffee, chocolate and cake. They have many different kinds of chocolate, and it's not very expensive. The owner of the shop makes the chocolate and cakes (which is probably why it's not very expensive).
Would you like to make your own chocolate? At 'Coffee and Chocolate', on Sundays there is a 'chocolate classroom'. So customers can make their own chocolates. After making chocolate they can take the chocolate home. I hope that everyone goes and tries 'chocolate classroom'.
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