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Writing for my classmates in high school....
A famous saying is, "There are 3 things that never come back: a flied arrow, spoken words and a long gone day."
I am sure that everybody has sweet memories of high school. I miss my classmates so much! I miss the days when we stayed all afternoon, instead of only until the morning as usual. We would review lessons before an important test, and we talked so much about dreams, family, relationship--even boyfriends...=)
In my memories, you all are silly, noisy, lovely, friendly, helpful, talkative. Do you remember the tradational day on which our school was established? We celebrated it by making a green canvas, decorated with pictures, flowers, paint, etc. We organized a food sale and divided the work between the boys and girls: the boys attracted customers, and the girls sold to them. Remember how we sold at a higher price than the others--but we sold out? It was amazing!
Events at night were the greatest. I loved the shows where all high school students performed a talent: music, dance, play, fashion, performance--and some things only God knows what it was (lol). I remember we got a silver medal for our performance of 'Proud of you'.
After graduating, we entered different universities, and have not seen each other in a long time. I wish you all the best with everything you do, and I hope that we always get a long with each other like we used to. Someday, I hope we will have time to stand side by side and sing the songs that we love.
PS: Thank you for reading the notebook entry above. I would be very happy if you correct my mistakes. Again, thank you so much! Have a nice day, everybody.
Hi little Carol, I hope my corrections help you. Btw: my mom's name is Carol ;)
~Russ
Writing for my classmates in high school....
The famous saying is there are 3 things that never come back, a flied arrow, spoken words and far away day.I am sure that everybody always has sweet memories in high school.
I really miss my classmates so much. I miss the day on which we had to stay in the afternoon (we only stayed in class in the morning) to review the lessions before the important tests and talked so much about our dreams, our family, our relationship, even our boy friends...=) In my memories, you are naughty, noisy, lovely, friendly, helpful, talkative.
Do you remember the tradational day on which our school was established? We made a green canvas and decorated with some pictures, flowers, paint, etc...
We organized a food department and diviseddivided one of us to do all into two groups: the boys attracted to the customers who were students in high school and the girls sold food to them. Although we sold our food? at a higher prise price than the others but we sold them out. It was amazing.
Events at night are the greatest. They hold the show where all students in high school could perform their talent for music, dance, play, fashion performance and things only God knows (lol)
I remember we got a silver medal for the performance of "Proud of you"...
After graduating, we entered the different universities and have a long time no see. I wish you all the best everything and hope that we alwasys always get along with each other like we used to. I wish some day we have time to stand by side to sing the song that we love....
P/s : Thank you for reading the notebook above, i am very happy if you can correct my mistake. Thank you so much again. Have a nice day everybody.
Writing for About My Highschool Classmates in high school....
There is a famous saying in that there are 3 three things that can never come back: an flied arrow being shot, spoken words spilt out of the mouth and far away the passing of the day.__I am sure that everybody all of us always have sweet memories in of our high school days.
I really miss my classmates so very much. I miss the days that after our morning classes when we on which we had to stay in the afternoon (we only stayed in class in the morning) had to review the lessions before the important tests our major exams in the afternoons; to and talked so much about our dreams, our family, our relationfriendships, and even our boyfriends boy friends...=) In my memories, you are were naughty, boisterous noisy, lovely, friendly, helpful, and talkative.
Do you remember the tradational day anniversay of on which our school foundingwas established? We made a green canvas and decorated with some pictures, flowers, paints, etc...
We also organized a food department stall and divised one of us was made to take charge of selling. to do: the The boys of our highschool attracted to the customers who were students in high school and the became our customers? girls sold to them. Although Even though our prices were much higher we sold at a higher price than the others, but we were sold out. It was amazing.
Events at night are the greatest. The night events were the best. They hold the shows where all were performed by the students in high school could perform their There were so much talent for in which our music, in our dances, our play productions and of course the fabulous fashion show performance and things only God knows (lol)
I remember how we got a silver medal for the performance of "Proud of You"...
After graduating, we entered the different universities and have a long time did not see each other for a long time. no see. I wish you all the best of everything and hope that we alwasys get a long be with each other like we used to. I wish some day that we have the time to stand by side to sing together the songs that we love....
P/s : Thank you for reading the notebook above, I am very happy if you can correct my mistakes. Thank you so much again. Have a nice day everybody.[You sounds like a salesgirl]
I really miss my classmates so much. I miss the day on which we had to stay in the afternoon (we only stayed in class in the morning) to review the lessions before the important tests and talked so much about our dreams, our family, our relationship, even our boy friends...=) In my memories, you are naughty, noisy, lovely, friendly, helpful, talkative.
I miss my high school classmates so much . I reminisce the time when we had to stay in the school to brush up our lessons before the test . We talked about our dreams , family , relatives and boyfriends as well . In my memory , you are a strange mixure of naughty, noisy, lovely, friendly, helpful, and talkative .
Just take it as my practice template by taking advantage of your writing
After graduating, we entered the different universities and have a long time no see. I wish you all the best everything and hope that we alwasys get a long with each other like used to. I wish some day we have time to stand by side to sing the song that we love....
After graduated from high school , we were admitted to different universities and have no time to meet up . I really hope you have all the best thing and deeply wish we still have good relationship far and away . I am looking forward to having the opportunity to meet up to sing our beloved songs in the future .
Just take it as my practice by way of your writing
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