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sport Hello ! Today I have run ten kilometers in a forest. The ground was very wet because of all the rain wich is felt recently. It was not easy because when I made a step I had to be careful from slipping. But the advantage with this rainy weather is that the paths are totally free. All the joggers stay at home to stay dry and to watch the olympic games on tv !

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sport Jogging


Hello! ! Today I have run ran ten kilometers in a the forest. The ground was very wet because due to of all the recent rain which is felt recently. It was not easy because when I made have to be careful with each a step to prevent myself I had to be careful from slipping. But the advantage However, with this rainy weather the jogging  is that the paths are totally clear free. All the [Can't use all, since you are also a jogger and is jogging in the path] Most joggers prefer to stay dry at home to stay dry and to watch the Olympic Games on tvTV in the comfort of their homes!

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sport

Hello_! Today I have run ran ten (kilometers/kilometres) in a forest. The ground was very wet because of all the recent rain wich is felt recently. It was not easy because when I made a with each step I had to be careful from not to slipping. But The advantage with of this rainy weather is that the paths are totally free of people. All the joggers stay at home to stay keep dry and to watch the Olympic Games on TV_!

 

Explanation of the comments:

kilometers is the American English spelling

kilometres is the British English spelling

If you want to avoid confusion you can just use km instead.

 

You can use the indefinite article (a or an) in the phrase "in a forest," because the forest is not specific.

A specific, or definite, forest would be something like: "in the forest near my house."

 

In formal writing, we avoid using the conjunctions "and, but, because" to begin a sentence. In spoken English this is acceptable, but for formal writing it is avoided.

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Exercise

Hello_! Today I ran ten kilometers in the forest. The ground was very wet because of all the rain wich is felt recently. It was not easy because whenever I made a step I had to be careful not to slipping. But the advantage of this rainy weather is that the paths are totally empty. All the joggers stay at home to stay dry and to watch the Olympics on TV_!

 

Bon travail ! C'est plutôt bon. Mais il faut faire attention aux espaces ! Ce n'est pas un espace comme français. Par exemple :

 

"Wow! What do you think?"

"My favorite movies: Jurassic Park, Groundhog Day, Home Alone."

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sport

Hello ! Today I have run ten kilometers in a forest. The ground was very wet because of all the rain which is fell recently. It was not easy because when I made a step I had to be careful from about slipping. But the advantage with this rainy weather is that the paths are totally free. All the joggers stay at home to stay dry and to watch the olympic games on tv !

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