living and death
Recently, i am always thinking about living and death. I am scared of death.Because i can't hear and i can't see at that time.However,i don't want to be a vampire.Because i don't want to losemy soul and temperature.
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Life and Death
Recently, I'm always thinking about living and dying (life and death). I'm scared of death because I won't be able to hear or see when I'm dead. can't hear and i can't see at that time.However I don't want to be a vampire because I don't want to lose my soul and warm body temperature.
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We don’t usually use “recently” and "always ”together in the same sentence because they do not have the same meaning. Recently 就是 "'最近,” always 是 “总是.”
I would write it this way in 白话:
Recently I’ve been thinking a lot about life and death. I’m scared of dying. I won’t be able to hear or see anything. I don’t want to be a vampire!! I don’t want to lose my soul and vitality (气) (or: body and soul - 这两个单词是常常共同用的。)
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life and death
Recently i have been thinking about life and death. I am scared of dying because i won't be able to see or hear when i'm dead.However i don't want to be a vampire.Because i don't want to lose my soul and vitality.Вы хотите продвигаться быстрее?
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