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Introduction of Tang Dynasty:) Tang dynasty was the most magnificent period in feudal society 1. the clothing materials were exquisite(精致的) ,the structure was natural,graceful and elegant,adornments(装饰品)were splendid(出色的,极好的)----I love the Ru skirt of Tang,sooo pretty! 2. Dynesty is also have opening-mind,woman needn’t be forced to stay at home,if they have talent or ability,they can get a official position in court.women’s power is improved ,Gone Are the days when man enslaved and depreciated(贬低) the women.And women not just a tool for pregnet any more,they could divorced with their husband and marry another one,that’s sounds ridiculous and imposible in other Dynsty,cos woman always forced to be loyal to her husband even after he died,there too many stories said that,a 18 years old girl became a widow,they cant remarriage,and most of them have no ability to earn money,their life just get to the ending in such a beautiful age,and what Tang Dynesty gave to woman is their freedom.

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Introduction of The Tang Dynasty:)

 

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The Tang dynasty was the most magnificent period in the imperial times  feudal society [Feudal China ended when the Chou Dynasty collapsed].  This is due to the following reasons:


1. the Clothing materials were exquisite (精致的), the structure dress/form was natural,_graceful and elegant. Adornments_(装饰品)_were splendid_(出色的,极好的). ----I love the Ru [Now where is the character for this?] skirt of the period.  They are so gorgeous Tang,sooo pretty! [You are writing a formal essay, suddenly you switch into personal remarks and this makes your essay terrible.  It is like putting a 花鈿 on your nose! LOL]

2. The Dynasty is also allows great freedom to women. have opening-mind,woman needn’t be forced to stay at home,_If they have talent, they can elevate themselves to power by holding official capacity at the Court. No longer  or ability,they can get a official position in court.women’s power is improved ,Gone Are the days when man are they enslaved and be depreciated(贬低) the women.__And women not just a tool for pregnant any more,No longer are they egg laying machines.  Under Tang Law they can get a divorce (though only if certain conditions apply, such as the husband neglecting her) could divorced with their husband and get remarry to another.  All these sound ludicrous in later times when a woman has to remain faithful after her husband's death.  In those days, people get married young, so being an 18 year old widow hardly raises anyone's eyebrows.  one,that’s sounds ridiculous and imposible in other Dynsty,cos woman always forced to be loyal to her husband even after he died,there too many stories said that,a 18 years old girl became a widow,they cant remarriage,and most of them have no ability to earn money,their life just get to the ending in such a beautiful age,and what Tang Dynesty gave to woman is their freedom. The Tang Dynasty was a very progressive period.

[All these you will have to thank Empress Wu, for she instituted all these changes as she rose to power and finally became the only Chinese Female Emperor]

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