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Nice tonight It is been ages we did not have a chance to talk together. last night , it was a nice tonight with me. I and my friends had time to eat dinner,used prefernce drinks and talked conversation each other.all of people were very happy when told about life ourselves.
19 апр. 2014 г., 2:08
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Nice tonight

It is been ages we did not have a chance to talk together. last night , it was a nice tonight with me. I and my friends had time to eat dinner,used prefernce drinks and talked conversation each other.

<em>of the many</em>, <em>this is most important so I would like to share it. Do not repeat similar words like for example you would not say " I wrote writing the letter"  wrote is past , writing is present so similarly you don't need "talked" and "conversation". It is " We talked to each other " or " had a conversaton with each other".... take care you will get there I am sure..good job</em>

all of people were very happy when told about life ourselves.

19 апреля 2014 г.
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