ENTRY 1 This is the first time I wrote a notebook, and I will appreciate all correction and comment. I will write this in English. Today is a very boring day for me. I just sat down for the enti

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Stephanie Regina

ENTRY 1 This is the first time I wrote a notebook, and I will appreciate all correction and comment. I will write this in English. Today is a very boring day for me. I just sat down for the entire day, cannot do anything properly because I can't concentrate (haven't take my coffee yet) and by noon, I get sleepy, so I decided to take a nap, and it goes for 3 hours! When I woke up, I was pretty shocked with it, I thought : ****, It's already 4 pm and I haven't study for my final exams. So, I tried to focus my limited concentration (by taking coffe) to study, and after 30 minutes, it failed! I take a break from studying by playing piano, wondering around, how if I make some youtube video, what will people comment about my playing, will they hate it or cheer me up to train harder, and then I back to reality. Bored with piano, I turn on my laptop and here I am, try to help others with their Bahasa (hope it will be helpful for them), and try to write my first note about my life. And after writing this, I will try to restrain myself from laptop, can't study if I'm near it. Well I also thought: how to write this note in German. I guess it will be harder than write it in English. Thank you people for reading my note! And I also appreciate some topics to write in English, preferably something I can write in essay. because I'm trying to write some structured essay. Hope can make it someday.

22 мая 2014 г., 8:29

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ENTRY 1

This is the first time I wrote a notebook, and I would appreciate all corrections and comments.

I will write this in English.

Today is a very boring day for me. I just sat down for the entire day. I cannot do anything properly because I can't concentrate ( I haven't take my coffee yet) and by noon, I got sleepy, so I decided to take a nap, and I slept for 3 hours! When I woke up, I was pretty shocked about it, I thought : ****, It's already 4 pm and I haven't studied for my final exams. So, I tried to focus my limited concentration (by taking coffe) to study, and after 30 minutes, it failed! I took a break from studying by playing piano, wondering whether if I made some youtube video, what will people comment about my playing. Will they hate it or cheer me up to train harder, and then I came back to reality. Bored with piano, I turned on my laptop and here I am, try to help others with their Bahasa (hope it will be helpful for them), and trying to write my first note about my life. And after writing this, I will try to restrain myself from using my laptop, I can't study if I'm near it.

Well I also thought: how to write this note in German?. I guess it will be harder than writing it in English.

Thank you people for reading my note! And I would also appreciate some topics to write in English, preferably something I can write in an essay, because I'm trying to write some structured essays. Hope I can make it someday.

-Your English is very good, most of the corrections were minor details. Pay attention to tenses. You alternated between past and present several times.

-If you are looking for English essay topics, think of things an English reader might not know about your country. Have you been to interesting or unusual places? What about Indonesian foods, especially street foods? There must be interesting Indonesian books, movies, and TV shows. You have elections coming soon. Do you have a favorite candidate? If you can't think of topics about Indonesia, write about the places you would like to go.

28 мая 2014 г.

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