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Being Married is the Best Thing Ever
To me, life without a wife is like a fifty without the five. Also, being married means you have to shoulder a lot of responsibilities, but as they say, it's a necessary evil . I'm writing about this topic because it's the thing I miss. Despite this obsession about the marriage matter, I'll try to be objective and mention the pros and cons of this matter.
At first, let's cheer up and start with the advantages of marriage, of which there are so many. One of the most important advantages is when you get the right soul mate, you get inner peace, stability, and harmony, and you'll have children as well. The second important one is that there is always someone who is waiting for you, is worried about you, and wishing you the best. The third one is that despite any changes in life, you live with your chosen one no matter what the circumstances are.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages as well which are extremely frustrating. One of them -- and it's the biggest one -- is HOW TO GET MARRIED; and all of this is because of the high dowry, expenses, and the formality of our customs. The second thing is when you get the wrong wife, your life turns into a living hell.
To sum up, no matter what the situation is, marry and life will get better, as our Prophet (pbuh) advocated to us. There is a saying which says life is like a roller coaster -- it has its ups and downs; but it's your choice to scream or enjoy the ride. Therefore, don't let life affect you negatively.
Do not leave a space between a word and the period or comma which follows it. For example: Correct: "... fifty without a five." "... peace, stability, and harmony" Incorrect: "... fifty without a five ." "... peace , stability , and harmony , "
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