IELTS writing task 2 answer (26) (how does competitiveness affect individuals? is it good or bad?) Question: Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people. How does competitiven

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IELTS writing task 2 answer (26) (how does competitiveness affect individuals? is it good or bad?) Question: Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is competitiveness a positive or negative quality? Answer: It is true that many people who possess the quality of competitiveness have achieved great success. I believe that this particular trait has both positive and negative effect on people. However, it is positive on the whole. On the one hand, a sense of competition may lead to a more successful life. In order to compete with others in this world of fierce competition, one has to keep up his/her morale. In this way people can maintain a positive mindset, so that they do not afraid of failures, they draw experience instead of being finished for good. They are willing to learn new knowledge so as to keep surpassing others. It is undeniable that these people are more likely to be outstanding. However, too much competitiveness may hinder people from some opportunities due to a lack of team spirit. If people only think about making themselves extraordinary instead of working with others effectively, they may not be able to form an efficient team, which sometimes can provide opportunities that lead to success. This is particularly the case for those who just start an enterprise and need to pool collective wisdom and get better results in promoting their products. In my opinion, despite few downsides of competitiveness, this quality is beneficial in general. After all, employers normally employ extraordinary individuals, rather than recruiting a team. Instead of being mediocre in the best team, it is more likely that one can be distinguished and more successful if he/she can stand out in the crowd because of exceptional personal ability. This can be achieved by keeping oneself enthusiastic about being out of the ordinary. In conclusion, although possessing a sense of competition has both positive and negative impact on individuals, I would argue that it is a valuable quality overall. (please tell me whether you think I've answered the first question right. and thank you very much for correcting my essay!!)

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IELTS writing task 2 answer (26) (how does competitiveness affect individuals? is it good or bad?)

Question:
Competitiveness is considered to be a positive quality among people. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is competitiveness a positive or negative quality?

Answer:
It is true that many people who possess the quality of competitiveness have achieved great success. I believe that this particular trait has both positive and negative effects on people. However, on the whole it is positive.

On the one hand, a sense of competition may lead to a more successful life. In order to compete with others in this world of fierce competition, one has to keep up his/her morale. In this way, people can maintain a positive mindset so that they do not afraid of failures, and they draw upon experience instead of being finished for good. They are willing to learn new things so as to keep surpassing others. It is undeniable that these people are more likely to be outstanding.

However, too much competitiveness may hinder people from some opportunities due to a lack of team spirit. If people only think about making themselves extraordinary instead of working with others effectively, they may not be able to form an efficient team, which sometimes can provide opportunities that lead to success. This is particularly the case for those who have just started an enterprise and need to pool collective wisdom and get better results in promoting their products.

In my opinion, despite a few downsides of competitiveness, this quality is generally beneficial. After all, employers normally employ extraordinary individuals rather than recruiting a team. Instead of being mediocre in the best team, it is more likely that one can be distinguished and more successful if he/she can stand out in the crowd because of exceptional personal ability. This can be achieved by keeping oneself enthusiastic about being out of the ordinary.

In conclusion, although possessing a sense of competition has both positive and negative impacts on individuals, I would argue that it is a valuable quality overall.

(please tell me whether you think I've answered the first question right. and thank you very much for correcting my essay!!)