杨柳
Friendship is nice I like to meet different friends,everyone in the world is special,everyone has his own opinion to the world ,when we meet each other ,we can share what we have experienced,things we like or hate .Communication is fantistic!
21 авг. 2014 г., 14:18
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Friendship is nice

I would like to meet different friends, everyone in the world is special, everyone has his, or her, own opinion to about the world ,. When we meet each other, we can share what we have experienced, things we like or hate. Communication is fantistic!

 

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21 августа 2014 г.
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Friendship is Nice

I like to meet different friends, everyone in the world is special, everyone has his own opinion to about the world. ,When we meet each other, we can share what we have experienced, things we like or hate .Communication is fantastic!

21 августа 2014 г.
Yep right.
21 августа 2014 г.
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