Just some random thouhts
When haze collects <em>over the</em> sea, islands float on <em>the</em> haze. If someone connects (suggestion: were to <em>string</em>) some rope from island to island, it would make (suggestion: make <em>for</em>) nice zip-lines, and riding the zip-lines from one island to other islands must be exciting.
I smelled (suggestion: <em>took in)</em> the fragrance of leaves in the cool morning. <em>It</em> felt great to drink <em>an</em> icy cup of lemonade (I enjoyed an icy cup of lemonade). On my <em>way home</em> from school, (<em>the)</em> sunlight settles on hillsides like glitters <em>of gold</em>.
<em>Looking at (or contemplating)</em> the sea, I just thought what it would feel like to become a giant and then sit on those leafy islands. I also imagined <em>about</em> (or <em>fantasized</em> about) being a jellyfish. Its graceful movements are fascinating, but it <em>wouldn't</em> have any worries since it has no brain. It would be nice to have <em>a</em> starfish's cloning ability when it's cut in halves as well (or <em>too</em>). And I wanna be a bee and buzz from flower to flower. Sometimes I want to make my own air with oxygen like trees doing photosynthesis (<em>or</em> the way trees do photosynthesis). If only I were able to transform into another species.
Reads amazing! The underlined words are just my suggestions.