Aloha!

Aloha! Aloha! Aloha!
I am Sulan, I am new one here ! 1*
1,May I have your help to practice English ?  2*
2, I just moved here from Beijing China.
3, I am very good at Chinese, if you speak American English and want to learn Chinese, don't be hesitated hesitate to contact on me!
I am sure I will be your a wonderful new friend ! 3*
Best Regards,
Sulan
Today.......

Very few mistakes.

I would probably say in these situations:

1* My name is Sulan, I'm new here.

2* Can you help me to practice English.

3* I'm sure we will become friends.