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A volleyball match There had a volleyball match yesterday in our unit.I am one of the players. I’m a setter on the court . This is a very important position . I build up an attacks every time when the other players pass the ball to me. Finaly, we won the game through the efforts of the half an hour.
3 сент. 2014 г., 3:52
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A volleyball match

There had  was a volleyball match yesterday (in our unit.)  by our team , I am one of the players. I’m a setter on the court . This is a very important position . I build up an attack  every time when the other players pass the ball to me. Finaly  Finally , we won the game through the efforts of the whole team during the half an hour game .



Well done , was not completely sure some of your meaning so have changed slightly togive better structure and meaning .

Hope this helps ,  Ian - English teacher / China .

3 сентября 2014 г.
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