Victor
My first entry. Hello everybody, This is my first entry in this web page. I hope that it is written properly, if you find any error please advise me in order do not replicate it later. If somebody is studying spanish I might support him in order to improve their knowladge of this language.
17 сент. 2014 г., 17:43
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My first entry.

Hello everybody,

This is my first entry in this web page. I hope that it is written properly. However, if you find any error [more severe to me] mistake, please advise me so that I won't repeat in order do not replicate it later. [replicate implies repetition with a purpose]

If somebody [too slangy, "someone" is better] you are interested in is studying Spanish I can help! might support him in order to improve their knowledge of this language. [too formal and cold sounding, doesn't show sincerity]

17 сентября 2014 г.

My first entry.

Hello everybody,

This is my first entry in this web page. I hope that it is written properly, if you find any errors please advise me in order so I do not replicate it them later.

If somebody is studying spanish I might support help him in order to improve their knowladge of this language.

17 сентября 2014 г.
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