Fabrizio
My first time! Hi guys, this is my first time that I write on Italki. I would like to learn English because I would like to work out of Italy. I really like to help to other people with their italian.
19 сент. 2014 г., 14:20
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My first time!

Hi guys, this is my first time writing that I write on Italki. I would like to learn English because I would like want [1] to work outside of Italy. I really like to help to other people with their italian.

 

[1] "Would like" works here but I replaced it with "want" since you already used "would like" in the same sentance.

19 сентября 2014 г.

My first time!

Hi guys, this is my first time writing on Italki. I want to learn English because I would like to work outside of Italy. I really enjoy helping other people with their Italian.

Vey good!

21 сентября 2014 г.
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