Hope - Italian Girl
Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much! Hello everyone. I'm talking about me. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in everyone. I'm here to learn/improve my English, but I could also learn something deeper, through some beautiful conversations that there will be, I hope. See you and... thanks in advance! (<--- is correct to say "thanks in advance"?)
21 сент. 2014 г., 13:12
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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much!

 

Hello everyone. I'm talking about myselfme. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in from everyone. I'm here to learn and improve my English, but I could but also learn something deeper. That is, through some beautiful meaningful conversations that there will be coming soon. , I hope. Be more positive :) See you and... Thanks in advance! (<--- is correct to say "thanks in advance"?) Yup!

21 сентября 2014 г.
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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much!

Hello everyone. I'm talking about me. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in everyone. I'm here to learn/improve my English, but I could also learn something deeper, through some beautiful future conversations, that there will be, I hope. See you and... thanks in advance! (<--- is it correct to say
"thanks in advance"?) Yes, it is.

21 сентября 2014 г.
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Could you correct this text, please? Thank you so much!

Hello everyone. I'm talking about me. I'm an Italian girl. I believes in love and in all that is pure. I also believe in all that is beautiful, refined and elegant. I am a creative person but I hate superficiality. I think there is something to learn in everyone. I'm here to learn/improve my English, but I could also learn something deeper, through some beautiful conversations that there will be, I hope. See you and... thanks in advance! (<--- is correct to say
"thanks in advance"?) (Yes it is!)

21 сентября 2014 г.
Thank you very much Louis! Do you study Italian language? May we chat and help each other? Have a nice day! :-)
23 сентября 2014 г.
Well done, and very nice sentiments! Complimenti!
23 сентября 2014 г.
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