My favorite writter I like read. My favorite writter it's Tres Seymour, a man that lives in Hart County, Kentucky, United States of America (USA). Your first novel it's "Life in the Desert" and him s

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My favorite writter I like read. My favorite writter it's Tres Seymour, a man that lives in Hart County, Kentucky, United States of America (USA). Your first novel it's "Life in the Desert" and him second novel it's "The revelation of the San Bruno". The last it's my favorite novel. Tres Seymour works in the National Parks Services in the National Park Mammoth Cave in the south of Kentucky. Suena muy mal?

5 дек. 2014 г., 23:30

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My favorite writter writer/author.

I like read. My favorite writter author it's is Tres Seymour, a man that lives in Hart County, Kentucky, United States of America (USA).
Your first novel it's "Life in the Desert" and him second novel it's "The revelation of the San Bruno". (This sentence doesn't have a verb. A sentence needs a verb to denote some kind of action). Your His first two novels it's were "Life in the Desert" and him second novel it's "The revelation of the San Bruno". The last it's second one is my favorite novel.
Tres Seymour works in for the National Parks Services in the at National Park Mammoth Cave, south Kentucky. (or perhaps, Tres Seymour works for the National Parks Services in southern Kentucky at National Park Mammoth Cave.)

Suena muy mal?

(Not bad at all. Good Job!)

6 декабря 2014 г.

The way that Steven Wait changed that line in his correction below is a good way to say what you were trying to say.

6 декабря 2014 г.

The revelation of the San Bruno it's my favorite novel.

6 декабря 2014 г.

"The last it's my favorite novel." Did you mean that the second novel that you mentioned ("The revelation of the San Bruno) is your favorite novel or did you mean that the last novel that he ever wrote is your favorite novel?

6 декабря 2014 г.

My favorite writer

I like to read. My favorite writer is Tres Seymour, a man whothat lives in Hart County, Kentucky, United States of America (USA).
Your Hisfirst novel is "Life in the Desert" and hishim second novel is "The revelation of the San Bruno". The last is my favorite novel.
Tres Seymour works in the National Parks Service in the National Park Mammoth Cave National Park in the south of Kentucky.

Suena muy mal?