Has The Ease of Cooking Improved Life?

Many people are now too busy with their work at the office and do not have any energy left to prepare food at home. The presence of technological advancements in food, such as the emergence of instant food and fast food, has helped them to prepare and get their food easily.

They do not have to spend hours in the kitchen to prepare their daily meals. For those who love cooking, it might be really enjoyable, but for some those who do not, it is really burdensome. They have to devote their time and energy to make one kind of food for themselves or for the family. Moreover, after cooking time has ended, they have to clean up all the utensils they have used. That will spend take more time and energy.

Instant food and fast food are have become so helpful for some people nowadays. For instance, to cook noodles, we just have to pour hot water and wait for about 3 minutes and it is done! Really easy, isn’t it? Or they just have to stop by at the nearest fast food restaurant on their way to the office and spend only about 5 minutes to get the food. Those are really simple especially for busy people who have a lot of things to do at work.

But there is also disadvantage are also disadvantages of consuming too much instant food and fast food. The preservatives contained in them can harm the body if it is consumed every day. It can caused serious illnesses such as cancer. Thus, people who often consume instant food or fast food due to lack of time to cook fresh food have to balance it by consuming more nutritional food, like fruits or fresh vegetables.

The ease of cooking these days has improved productivity of life. When While people in the old days felt it cumbersome to spend hours to cook cooking food, now they can find it really easy to get food. On the one hand, there are positive impacts, but on the other hand, there is a negative side, that consuming too much instant food or fast food will harm the body.

"one kind of": I'm not sure why these words are included in this sentence.

"they" ... "their": I would change these to "we" and "our" because you used "we" in the previous sentence.

Overall, great job!

I just corrected a couple of sentences.

Has The Ease of Cooking Improved Life?

Moreover, when they are finished cooking they have to clean up all the cookware they have used. That will take more time and energy.

Instant food and fast food have become very helpful for some people nowadays. ... Or they just have to stop by at the nearest fast food restaurant on their way to the office and spend only about 5 minutes to get the food.

It can caused serious illnesses such as cancer.

The ease of cooking these days has improved the productivity of life. When While people in the old days felt it cumbersome to spend hours to cook food, now they can find it really easy to get food.