12/27/2014 One day, I went to school. I walked along the street with hurried paces in the crowd. Something was in my mind. Suddenly, I couldn’t find a purchase and slipped. When I recovered from my s

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12/27/2014 One day, I went to school. I walked along the street with hurried paces in the crowd. Something was in my mind. Suddenly, I couldn’t find a purchase and slipped. When I recovered from my shock, I was sitting on the ground. I turned my head and saw a piece of banana skin lying on the ground. So, this is the one that made me slipped.

21 дек. 2014 г., 5:59

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12/27/2014 (a futuristic diary?)

One day, when I went was on my way to school, I walking rapidly/quickly (alternatively just 'rushing') along the/a crowded street with hurried paces (the order is incorrect, and better to convert the phrases to the adjective and adverb) in the crowd. Something was in my mind. Suddenly, I couldn’t find a purchase lost my footing and slipped. When I recovered from my shock, I found I was sitting on the ground. I turned my head and saw a piece of banana skin lying on the ground. So, I thought to myself this is the one that is what made me slipped.

What is going on in that complex brain of yours Mila? What nade you write this?

25 декабря 2014 г.

12/27/2014

One day, I went to school. I walked along the street with a hurried pace with in the crowd. Something was on my mind. Suddenly, I couldn’t find my footing and slipped. When I recovered from my shock, I was sitting on the ground. I turned my head and saw a piece of banana skin lying on the ground. So, this is the one that made me slip.

21 декабря 2014 г.

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