Hana Hoang
Taking about fear My biggest fear is death of fatal diseases. It usually make people who suffer an anguish of body and mind. About 5 months ago, my cousin was died by addle-brained. He is a son of my aunt and was only 13 years old. That time, this disease happened so quickly. He suddenly had a fever in late June. Our family took him to the hospital. The first time, his disease wasn't discovered and the doctors did more tests for him. Then, his health was downed. Our family was very nervous. The doctor said he couldn't live next 2 months. May be, we should have a surgery. We had two option. The first option, If we agreed to have a surgery for him: The probability of success is only 30 percents and he could live along time. In other words, he could be affected by this disease in the future. If a surgery would be failed that we would be lost immediately a relative. The second option, If we didn't want a surgery, he still was suffered an anguish of his body and mind. The, his family thought more and decided to have a surgery for him. But, he couldn't cross this disease. Our family and his relatives are very sad.
27 дек. 2014 г., 3:21
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Taking about fear (Do you mean: Talking About Fear?)

My biggest fear is catching a fatal disease. People who catch such diseases suffer anguish of both the body and the mind. About 5 months ago my cousin, who was only 13 years old, became addle-brained, and died. The disease progressed so quickly. He came down with a fever in late June, and our family took him to the hospital. At that time, his disease wasn't discovered and the doctors conducted more tests. In the meantime, my cousin's health deteriorated. Our family was very worried. The doctor said he wouldn't live another 2 months. He suggested surgery. We were given two options. The first option was to agree for him to have surgery, for which there was a 30 per cent chance he would survive for now (but he could still be affected by his disease in the future.) If surgery failed, he would die instantly. The second option was to do nothing, and he would continue to suffer mental and physical anguish for the rest of his life. After thinking it through, our family decided to allow him to have surgery. Unfortunately, my cousin did not survive the operation. Our family is now very sad.

 

NOTE: "Surgery" is an uncountable noun in English, like "exercise", "rest", "therapy", etc. See <a href="https://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/nouns-uncountable-list.htm">https://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/nouns-uncountable-list.htm</a>; for more examples.

28 декабря 2014 г.
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Talking About Fear

My biggest fear is death by fatal diseases. It usually makes people who suffer in anguish of body and mind. 5 months ago, my cousin passed away by addle-brained(?). He was my aunt's son and was only 13 years old. At the time, his disease set upon him so quickly. He suddenly had a fever in late June. Our family took him to the hospital. The first time, his disease wasn't discovered and the doctors did more tests for him. His health then deteriorated. Our family was very nervous. The doctor said he wouldn't live pass the next 2 months. We had two options. The first option: If we agreed to have a surgery for him the probability of success was only 30 percents and he could live for some time. In other words, he could be affected by this disease in the future. If the surgery were to fail we would immediately lose a relative. The second option: If we didn't want a surgery, he would still suffer the anguish of his body and mind. His family thought more and decided to have a surgery for him. He wouldn't overcome this disease. Our family and his relatives are very sad.

4 января 2015 г.
I hope that you and your family can forget the fear quickly .
4 января 2015 г.
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