Giulip
Does this sentence sound correct? It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.
26 янв. 2015 г., 13:19
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Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

 


It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage somebody so much, resulting  in making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

27 января 2015 г.

Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.


It is so stupid when specialised <em>(specialized = American, so not incorrect)</em> discourage somebody so much by making them hate what they are supposed to love.

 

<em>I don't like this sentence though, it feels a little disjointed. Perhaps - "It isn't good that specialised schools discourage people from learning/studying, by making them hate what they love". </em>

<em>What do you mean by specialised schools?</em>

15 ноября 2015 г.

Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialised schools discourage somebody so much that, in the end, it makes them hate something that they loved previously.

11 ноября 2015 г.

Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage somebody so much that they end up making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

 

Correction notes: Very good! Just needed to rearrange a few words!

26 января 2015 г.
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