Will it snow tomorro? The weather forecast says it will snow tomorrow. It's getting me down. I really loved playing with snow in my childhood, but now, I don't like that. Transportation is not on ti

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Will it snow tomorro? The weather forecast says it will snow tomorrow. It's getting me down. I really loved playing with snow in my childhood, but now, I don't like that. Transportation is not on time, I can't ride my bike and I would catch a cold. I hope it's going not to be too heavy. My son and daughter are looking forward to snow though. They are singing "Do you wanna build a snow man". Snow is good for kids, bad for adults like me.

29 янв. 2015 г., 4:37

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Will it snow tomorrow?

The weather forecast says it will snow tomorrow.
It's getting me down. I really loved playing with snow in my childhood, but now, I don't like that.
Transportation is not on time, I can't ride my bike and I can catch a cold.
I hope it's going not to be too heavy.

My son and daughter are looking forward to snow though.
They are singing "Do you wanna build a snow man".
Snow is good for kids, bad for adults like me.

29 января 2015 г.

Will it snow tomorrow?

The weather forecast says it will snow tomorrow.
It's getting me down. I really loved playing with snow in my childhood, but now, I don't like that.
Transportation is not on time, I can't ride my bike and I can catch a cold.
I hope it's not going to be too heavy.

My son and daughter are looking forward to snow though.
They are singing, "Do you wanna build a snow man".
Snow is good for kids, bad for adults like me.

29 января 2015 г.

Thank you for the detailed explanation!

29 января 2015 г.

Just a few minor changes like the would for can. not going instead of going not. also the comma before the quotation. It's in order to signify the change from you declaring it is "they" referring to your son and daughter and what they are singing.

29 января 2015 г.