Luca
Salam! Salam dustam, hal-e shoma cetorid? Man Luca hastam va do sal qabl zabane farsiro yad gereftam! 32 sal daram va dar daneshgae rom dars khandam. In avvale komale man be zabane farsi ast. Bebakhshid agar alefbae arabi estefade nemikonam, ama safheklide farsi nadaram. Mahmulan dar ketabe daneshgah dars mikhonam, gahi filme iran va BBC persian tamasha mikonam. Man omidvaram ke kheili mardom ommid-vār khāham bud! kheili mamnoonam khodahafez!
11 февр. 2015 г., 22:52
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Salam!

Salam dustam,
hal-e shoma cetoride? Man Luca hastam va do sale ke qabl zabane farsi ro yad gereftam migiram! 32 sal daram va dar daneshgaHe rom dars khandam. In avvalein komale yaddashte man be zabane farsi ast. Bebakhshid agar (az) alefbaYe arabi estefade nemikonam, ama chon safhekElide farsi nadaram.
Ma'mulan dar ketabekhaneye daneshgah dars mikhAnam, gahi filme irani va BBC persian tamasha mikonam.

Man omidvaram ke kheili mardom ommid-vār khāham bud bashand!

kheili mamnoonam

khodahafez!

15 февраля 2015 г.
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Salam!

Salam dustam,
hal-e shoma cetorid? Man Luca hastam va do sal qabl zabane farsiro yad gereftam! 32 sal daram va dar daneshgae rom dars khandam. In avvale komale man be zabane farsi ast. Bebakhshid agar alefbae arabi estefade nemikonam, ama safheklide farsi nadaram.
Mahmulan dar ketabe daneshgah dars mikhonam, gahi filme iran va BBC persian tamasha mikonam.

Man omidvaram ke kheili mardom besham!

kheili mamnoonam

khodahafez!

11 февраля 2015 г.

Salam!

Salam dustam,
hal-e shoma chetoreh? Man Luca hastam va do sal qabl zabane farsiro yad gereftam! 32 sal daram va dar daneshgae rom dars khandam. In avvalin yaddashte man be zabane farsi ast. Bebakhshid agar alefbae arabi estefade nemikonam, ama safheklide farsi nadaram.
Mahmulan dar ketabe daneshgah dars mikhonam, gahi filme iran va BBC persian tamasha mikonam.

Man omidvaram ke kheili mardom ommid-vār khāham bud! (??)

kheili mamnoonam

khodahafez!

11 апреля 2015 г.

Salam!

Salam dustam,
hal-e shoma cetorid (chetore)? Man Luca hastam va do sal qabl zabane farsiro yad gereftam! 32 sal daram va dar daneshgae rom dars khandam. In avvale komale(?) man be zabane farsi ast. Bebakhshid agar alefbae arabi estefade nemikonam, ama safheklide farsi nadaram.
Mahmulan dar ketabe (ketabkhoone) daneshgah dars mikhonam, gahi filme irani va BBC persian tamasha mikonam.

Man omidvaram ke kheili mardom ommid-vār khāham bud! (i think u should write this sentence in eng!)



kheili mamnoonam

khodahafez!

12 февраля 2015 г.

Salam!

Salam dustamn,
hal-e shoma cetorid (chetore)?. Man Luca hastam va do sal qabl zabane farsiro yad gereftam! 32 sal daram va dar daneshgahe rom dars khandam. In avvalen komale (?) man be zabane farsi ast. Bebakhshid agar alefbae arabi estefade nemikonam, ama (chon/bareye inke) safheklide farsi nadaram.
Mahmulan dar ketabe daneshgah dars mikhonam (Ma'mulan Ketabhaye daneshgah ra mikhanam), gahi (ham) filme irani va BBC persian Farsi tamasha mikonam.

Man omidvaram ke kheili mardom ommid-vār khāham bud! (?)

kheili mamnoonam

khodahafez!

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if you want to say that you are still learning persian, it's better to say "do sal ast ke zabene farsi ra yad migiran" or "do sal ast ke shoru' Kardam be yadgirye zabane farsi"

 

good luck!

12 февраля 2015 г.
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каталонский, английский, французский, итальянский, персидский (фарси), португальский, испанский
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каталонский, английский, французский, персидский (фарси), португальский, испанский