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Travel diary I tried to write a travel diary in English. But, it was difficult to write that I want to say or I am thinking it. I had taken many photographs. Some part of there has posted my blog. Would you like to see it. If you found that I have to correct point, can you please tell me. http://ketsumura.blogspot.jp/
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Travel diary

I tried to write a travel diary in English. But it was difficult to write what I wanted to say or what I was thinking about.
I had taken many photographs. Some of them part of there has are posted on my blog. Would you like to see them? 
If you find that I have to make corrections point, can you please tell me.

http://ketsumura.blogspot.jp/

1 марта 2015 г.
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