Jose
my target Hello :) good evening here in America :) I want to tell you about my target of be here I wous like to talk many languages because I want to travel through the world and I want to meet a lot of people around the earth I want to get friends here to talk about their countries, their culture and theirselves too Good night friends :)
5 мар. 2015 г., 2:38
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my target

Hello :) good evening here in America :)
I want to tell you about my target of be being here.
I wous would like to talk speak many languages because I want to travel through the world and I want to meet a lot of people around the earth.
I want to get friends on here to talk about their countries, their culture and theirselves themselves too. 

Good night friends :)

 

-Good job! Your writing fits together nicely. You could also say "goal" instead of target.

5 марта 2015 г.
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30 ноября 2015 г.
I am a Chinese college student nice to meet you
5 марта 2015 г.

my target

Hello :) good evening here in America :)
I want to tell you about my purpose in being here.
I would like to speak many languages because I want to travel throughout the world and I want to meet a lot of people around the world.
I want to make friends here and to converse with them about their countries, their culture and themselves too. 

Good night friends :)

5 марта 2015 г.
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