kaori
Kyoto I experienced 「oiran」in Kyoto. I was so happy. Because i could put on a beautiful kimono and i made a nice hearstyle.
6 мая 2015 г., 7:58
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Kyoto

I experienced 「oiran」in Kyoto.
I was so happy because I could put on a beautiful kimono and I had a nice hairstyle.

 

Hello Kaori,

 

Can you tell us a little more about 「oiran」 it sounds interesting.

 

When we use 'I' for me, it is always a capital (big) letter.

You don't need to start a new sentence with 'because' as it related directly to the first part.

You 'have a hairstyle'

 

Hope this helps

 

 

6 мая 2015 г.

Kyoto

I experienced 「oiran」in Kyoto.
I was so happy. Because i could put on a beautiful kimono and i made a nice hairstyle.

6 мая 2015 г.
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