Hello Cem,
Great entry! Please find my corrections below.
Original:
hi everyone
Hi everyone, i am happy to be here, i want to practice for my english, and i am started to study russian language, we can share our language, we can help each of us, thank you
Edited:
hi everyone
Hi everyone, I am happy to be here. I want to practice my English. I'm also studying Russian. we can share our languages, and we can help each other. Thank you
Notes:
Really nice job on your entry, Cem. A few rules to keep an eye out for:
1) In English, all language names (Russian, English, Japanese) should be capitalized.
2)"i" should always be capitalized to appear as "I."
Let me know if you have any questions about my other corrections! I look forward to helping you with your studies.
Best,
Charlie