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Why did i do this? Soap opera always spend my whole weekend time. Last weekend,i was going to study English, but at last I was attracted by soap opera. I was so guilty....
25 мая 2015 г., 11:13
Исправления · 2
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Why did I do this?

Soap operas always take up my whole weekend.
Last weekend, I was going to study English, but at last[1] I was distracted by soap opera[2].
I felt so guilty....

 

Red are errors, Green are more natural words

[1] at last is not correct. Perhaps 'at the last minute' would be OK.

[2] it is not natural here to say 'soap opera'. It would be better to say 'a soap opera'(if it was one) or 'soap operas' or even 'watching soap opera(s)'.

25 мая 2015 г.
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