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my sister My sister's wedding is after two weeks. I am very happy for her. she is amazing girl and deserves a life full of love, comfort and happiness. I will miss her so much when she go to her a new house.
7 июля 2015 г., 6:41
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My sister's wedding is in two weeks. I am very happy for her because she is an amazing girl and deserves a life full of love, comfort, and happiness. I will miss her so much when she goes to her new house.

 

7 июля 2015 г.
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