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I want to change the life of the children that live in my community I'm learning english because i want to have a better lif,how? English in my country means money, with that money i will be able to go at the university, and i have the responsability to help my family, but i know that it is my duty, my real resolution is:teaching english to the children that live in my cummunity of that way they'll have the chance to chose another option that the street
2 авг. 2015 г., 22:27
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I want to change the life of the children that live in my community

I'm learning English because I want to have a better life. How? English in my country means money, with that money I will be able to go to the university. and I also have the responsability to help my family, and while I know that it is my duty, my real goal is teaching English to the children that live in my community. of That way they'll have the chance to chose another option than the street.


<em>[Good work.   Your errors were mostly in the complex phrases.  Remember that the pronoun 'I' is always capitalized.]</em>

2 августа 2015 г.
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