As soon as I saw the handwriting on the envelope I smiled. Would you correct this for me, please?
As soon as I saw the handwriting on the envelope I smiled. I was reading the news when somebody knocked to the door. He was a courier, who gave me an envelope. next I signed it and opened it quickly and what a surprise it was to me! It was a handwritten note, in which it said it that I had won a prize about two millions of euros. Suddenly IT came to my head, how my life would change and I how would spend on my money. Firstly, I would buy a red sports car, then a new loft, with a spectacular view to the river; secondly, I would leave my job for a time, without enduring to my boss; and lastly I would share everything with a friend and we would travel over all Europe and EE UU and things like that. However my happiness didn't last too long, because I went to the lottery shop and I was startled at the person who sold the prize, I still remember her stupid face! With an ironic and a wide smile in his face- he told me that everything had been a joke from my friend Robert.
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